My Opinion : Sponsors for Football Team

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A football team should accept money from corporate sponsors in order to be successful. Nowadays, corporate sponsors become one of the factors of success on a football team.  Money from sponsors have so many benefits for the football team.

First reason, sponsors support the team to buy their equipment. A football team needs a big cash to buy from the clothes to practice equipment. 
Second, sponsors help the football team become famous. For example, The Barcelona football team is famous for becoming the sponsors of Nike and Qatar Airways.
Third, sponsors also help the football team player too. There are a lot of famous football play for advertising their sponsors. As an example, Lionel Messi is well-known for being the icon of Adidas. In result, sponsors become one of the most important things that give many benefits for the football team and the football player.

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